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commission for ukitty543 by JaystarNOW commission for ukitty543 by JaystarNOW
Hope u like if u don't i can redo it XD

for :iconukitty543:

btw commissions art opened: [link]
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:icondicl0nius:
You could've done MUCH better on this. First off, I'm going to talk about your anatomy. Your cat has no shoulders, or second ear. It has no muzzle. It has no neck either. And the toes aren't sideways. This cat has turkey legs. There doesn't need to be a curve like that, nor should there be that unneccessary line in the leg. The base of the tail is too wide. The cat needs to have the bridge of it's nose. Also, cat's whiskers do not protrude from the nose, nor is the nose round. The pupil should be black, and where you coloured it white should be the eye colour. Your shading is very bad. You shaded it on the back, where the lighting should be. The shading on the muzzle is okay, but the front leg shouldn't be shaded. The background is dull, and you should've been not lazy and used a smaller size for the grass brush. Blades of grass are not that big, unless your cat is the size of a mouse.
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Critique by wolfdog3232 Dec 28, 2012, 3:26:40 PM
The shading is poor, The anatomy is bad, The grass looks...weird, And there are some places where you got out of line. Also, The back leg looks quite strange. On a scale 1 to 10, I would rate it a 2.5.


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:iconvanillaxclover:
VanillaxClover Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Student Digital Artist
also i didn't know cats could walk literly on grass
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SugarrCane Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013
Can you please stop?
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:iconvanillaxclover:
VanillaxClover Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Student Digital Artist
look at the link jaystarNOW posted, look at the comment i left you'll see what i meant by that.
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:iconvanillaxclover:
VanillaxClover Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Student Digital Artist
that was shading?
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:iconjaystarnow:
JaystarNOW Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
r u happy now I might leave [link]
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:iconvanillaxclover:
VanillaxClover Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Student Digital Artist
i'm confused with th e back two legs
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:iconjaystarnow:
JaystarNOW Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
hum?
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:iconabbythekitty:
abbythekitty Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Student Digital Artist
OMG ITS AWESOME!! I LOVE IT THANK YOU SO MUCH!! :DUMMY:
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:iconjaystarnow:
JaystarNOW Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
thanks so much I am so glad u lie it XD
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