I am not quite sure if you, sir, are trolling or are just plain terrible at drawing. I feel when there is an artist on deviantart that seems to think they can draw, but cant, that i should help them out and deliver the sad truth. If you would like help learning how to draw, maybe you could seek assistance from me or a tutor. I personally think you have good ideas, but your drawings are quite horrible.
hint: MS Paint is NOT a good program for drawing. Try photoshop, autodesk, corel, or gimp programs
hint: study pictures of real things
hint: instead of goin right on there with lines, try sketching. You can control the shape of what youre attempting to depict, therefore making for a better drawing. Then, if you dont like the look of a sketch, you can trace over the sketched lines for a solid line.