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Deviousness `ChewedKandi has certainly gone out of her way to keep the vector community on the right path. Always making sure that her talents are infinitely scalable, Sharon has put her bezier curves to excellent use, and firmly anchored herself as an inspirational leader. We're absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for June 2013 to `ChewedKandi. Congratulations, Sharon! Read More
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Vision; Look at some pictures of cats for anatomy. The head is round. Some cats heads are oval shaped a bit. And, fluffy so add some lines that look like > To make it fluffy
The hair should be bigger to kind of cover the eyes a bit.
Also, with the paws add an L flipped vertically and placed~
The tail should be more left and make a curved line covering the tail where the big gap is.
Originality; Not very original. There are other people who have done an animal watching a city burn...
Technique; It's OK. Since it's unshaded and doesn't have a shadow it doesn't really look 3Dish. Since, you used the brush on the dark gray it has the stray pixels.
Impact; The gray cat stands out in the fire. Which is good~
The fire is made with the brush again so the fill bucket made it look all pixely again.
Overall; It could be a good picture with shading and using the pencil on different colors and fire.
Vision- First, the cat. I suggest studying some anatomy, as the legs, both back and front, look thin and unproportioned. The tail seems oddly connected and is in an awkward position. Next- the fire. Most fire is not composed of three solid layers of red, yellow, and orange. I would say that you should blend the three together better, perhaps by using intermediate colors between.
Originality- In general, a fire sence is not that original, but the reason I gave it 3 stars out of 5 was because the idea of a cat watching a city burn to the ground was intriguiging to me.
Technique- The unshaded and slightly scribbly lineart of this piece works, unfortunatly, agaist you. If you have straightined and smoothed the lines more, and added shading caused by the light of the roaring fire. Also, the awkward lines caused by the fill-bucketing tool take away from the overall piece as well.
Impact- Eh- the impact greatly suffers due to factors mentioned above, but the bright colors of the fire in contrast to the grey cat and dark buildings add to the ferociousness of the fire.
Overall- A nice idea, but it could have been implemented better. Study anatomy and shading a bit more, and this piece could be amazing!
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