Lets Watch the City Burn

Sorry, if this is harsh... but:

Vision; Look at some pictures of cats for anatomy. The head is round. Some cats heads are oval shaped a bit. And, fluffy so add some lines that look like > To make it fluffy <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/> The eyes... they are OK... just add those things at the bottom of your eyes that are a small <. The legs, those bumps then then straight lines don't look that great on it. The ears should be more of a ^ shape.
The hair should be bigger to kind of cover the eyes a bit. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Wink)"/>
Also, with the paws add an L flipped vertically and placed~
The tail should be more left and make a curved line covering the tail where the big gap is.

Originality; Not very original. There are other people who have done an animal watching a city burn...

Technique; It's OK. Since it's unshaded and doesn't have a shadow it doesn't really look 3Dish. Since, you used the brush on the dark gray it has the stray pixels.

Impact; The gray cat stands out in the fire. Which is good~
The fire is made with the brush again so the fill bucket made it look all pixely again.

Overall; It could be a good picture with shading and using the pencil on different colors and fire.