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Lets Watch the City Burn by JaystarNOW Lets Watch the City Burn by JaystarNOW
This is a pic I made on MS paint and no tablet so be kind this took me 2 hours cuz Paint is FIRETRUCKING stupid!
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This was a good idea and turned out nice. c: It's very difficult to draw in Paint with a mouse, and I think you did a good job. There are some things you could work on, though. Some easy things to fix would be coloring over those colored rings around the things you filled with the paint bucket, it might take a little while but it will make your artwork look neater and more finished. Also, the anatomy on the cat could be improved. I'm not an expert on feline anatomy, but some things that stood out are the proportions of the back legs and the lack of a neck. (this guide should help you [link]) Other than that, I can tell you tried and the result ended up cute. Keep up the good work. :D
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The body is far to skinny to begin with. The fire seems to look like water. The city back round needs work, unless you know buildings with windows that big you can see from a distance (speaking of, you need to work on perception in general). The hair on the cat is unnecessary, it just makes it look pitiful. The back legs are just bad, you'll have to erase the extra line there and make the hindquarters less chunky. It has no neck, the paws are too small, and the tail looks like a squirrels. Make the tail smoother, like a cats, a feathery tail isn't something beginners like you can pull off. It's missing claws as well.
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racotaco Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
if you find it fun, then draw, it does not matter how it comes out as long as you enjoyed doing it. theres a lot of negative comments on this, and some are NOT called for. true, its not the best but unless you have a fair critique and actually want to HELP the person, then don't comment at all. just take a few tutorials, study the bone structures and how to draw fire and just try to improve the best you can :)
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JaystarNOW Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
thanks XD
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racotaco Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
no problem ;3
prove them wrong :D
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JaystarNOW Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
Thanks XD
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racotaco Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
x3
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JaystarNOW Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
lol
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Phois Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist

Honestly I like the face and though the background could have been spruced up a little more I like it. I noticed this is the NEW Ms Paint, and i recommend downloading the older version that I grew up with. Search around for the 2007 or 2008 version of Ms Paint, it's free, and a whole lot better than the junky new version. There are many tutorials on this site for cat anatomy, and red-lines. [link]
That's one of the many red lining groups and they help to try and correct your drawings so you can draw whatever it is better the next time ^_^
I'm sorry for the bad comments you've been getting.
Some people don't realize there are others who may have just started drawing, with a mouse
I remember back in 2008 i started drawing and posting my artwork that i did with a mouse and...well it wasn't the best ever. Taking time however, and trying to improve anatomy throughout almost five years up to today proved to be the best decision. You'll get better, that is if you even want to. Just draw for fun!
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TrikSilverwolf Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hmm, there are too many negative comments on this, seriously people, there's no need to be nasty, okay, maybe you personally don't think this is very good, but art is subjective so others may disagree, and regardless, you don't have to be rude, if you have nothing constructive to say then go look at something else.

Lol, this is probably better than I could do with a mouse X3 Although I agree with the other people who have posted sensible critique comments, there are obvious anatomical flaws etc but I won't restate them as others have already pointed them out, so I'll leave some positive observation - the expression on the face is good and I like the idea. Keep practicing and remember to use reference images when possible and you'll improve greatly in no time ^^
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XxmalokyxX Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012
i'll just save time for you ..
2 words pal , QUIT DRAWING .
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Vincenttheawesome Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
IMA KILL YOU BITCH NO ONE HURTS MY CYBER-BEST FRIEND
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