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Another fail paint pic LOL me and my sister by JaystarNOW Another fail paint pic LOL me and my sister by JaystarNOW
Ok so i got back from vacation today and my sister was bugging the crap out of me so i made this fail pic LOL. mu parents say I should be nocer cause I am a fangirl but then i just say that i is not Katniss XD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Critique by Artistic-Panda Dec 28, 2012, 8:19:48 PM
Well, I don't want to seem rude, but since you asked for a critique, I will do my best.
The anatomy for the cat is a little too thin. Most house cats have thick bodies and thick, either long or short legs. It's also important to show the paw with all the toes (unless your style includes not showing the toes).
The tail is really, really long, and it's not consistently the same size all the way through. The nose on a cat are usually thinner and more triangular, plus the ears are too pointed. They need to be a little rounded at the top, and it's important to show the insides of the ears as well.
Your eyes are a little large, and they need to be seen on both sides (your hair on the cat cut part of it off)
Hope this helps!
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TwistedGears Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very adorable ^_^
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JaystarNOW Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
thx XD
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TwistedGears Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem.
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JaystarNOW Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
lol
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Soaring-of-the-Sky Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Student Filmographer
wtf? your parents thoguht jaystar was KATNISS?
I thought my parents were crazy!
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JaystarNOW Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
lol yush
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Nharlie Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012  Student Digital Artist
haha, yuss
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JaystarNOW Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
LOL
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